Friday, 6 June 2014

 Recount: a time I was Successful

W.A.L.T: Retell of a past experience
WILF: Audience has all the information needed

"Come on Jimi jump up, the horse wont buck", Nah Nah Nah' I  kept repeating, then I said "OK,' but you better hold the rope so I can jump on".
When I hopped on Neko let go of the rope and he said "Just sit there and hold the rope". You will get use to it!

I wish I could ride the horse 24/7 now I can!


2 comments:

  1. YEAH! Love it! I like how you told me how you felt on your first time. I have nothing helpful. Anyway nice one jimi.

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  2. who loves this blog well i do because i think that you should look up different words for said but instead of but i like how you put the walt in so i now what you are learning but i really loved it.

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